Monday, March 16, 2009

55 words

“Things will never go back to normal. “The fortune teller exclaimed. In confusion she walked out of the eerie, putrid shop straight into prince charming. He had no intention on sticking around, or even getting to know her but she wanted to try but instead she just let him slip away. She’ll always regret that.

3 comments:

  1. I really want this to continue! And putrid is such an awesome word, even though i have no idea what it means. It just sounds awesome.

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  2. i think putrid means strong smelling or something. but maybe revise the second to last line.

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  3. Awesome!!
    This story is so realistic and i love it..!!

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